CHANGES AND ENHANCEMENTS
For this scene where the doctor was telling Apple about her situation, the first scene was taken inside campus without Apple inside the screen. So we decided to add Apple into it, made sure the doctor have a proper attire, changed to a better location and changed the screenplay from vertical to horizontal. These changes will make the audience feel more comfortable will watching it because there are less negative spaces for the border which results a better composition in the rule of thirds. We focus on two people instead of focusing on just one full face doctor which is kinda weird, it seems like he is just talking to himself that way. The overall narrative had been improved after these changes.
CONTEXTUAL APPROACH
PRODUCTION 2
CHANGES AND ENHANCEMENTS
For this scene where the unknown figure appeared behind Apple without her knowing, instead of letting Apple directly face me after she closed the door, we changed the location of the unknown figure which was me to the upper floor, standing on a glass on the ground floor which was the ceiling for the underground, starring at her while she closes the door. We had this idea while we were shooting for this scene for the first time and we got terrified by the maid which was cleaning the glass above us, we thought that it was something else that float on air. After these changes, the whole narrative while be more terrifying and more scary.
THE IMPLEMENTATIONS OF THE METAPHORS IN THE CONTEXT OF DESIGN
The context of multimedia design using text, audio, still images, video and interactivity content forms. are in the right track. Everything is well recorded, properly edited and soon to be projected on a screen. We will be adding subtitles and combine some lip sync into the film. We had still images and interactivity content forms so i guess everything is fulfilled.